Английский: помогите перевести

[Kisa-Alisa]

caudalie, спасибо большое. Ваш перевод более верно отражает действительность

Последний вариант:

The article proposes a model of temporal constraints of production / consumption data for critical systems in the form of interval constraints. I think that the contribution is the possibility to distinguish the validity constraints of a data according to a consumer of this data.

The main weaknesses of the article are:

- The lack of validation of the approach on real cases;
- The lightness of treatment of related work that would include synchronous data-flow language (eg, Lustre) and "time-triggred" architecture (Giotto language);
- The quality of English is rather weak.